Friend in Dream

When i am in sorrow.
I am afraid to face tomorrow.
When i am in Happy.
I am afraid to loss today.

The road ahead is far and rough,
but nobody care for me enough.
no helping hand ever come.
Everybody seen like a scum.

When the candy i have is so sweet,
people around come entreat.
The smile on their face is fake.
Everybody come to trace me.

What is actually a friend?
are they someone to depend?
That someone never appear.
I hate their cavalier.
I know, i have no friend except a friend in dream.


By David Setiawan

Cinderella Tears

I see Cinderella tears on your eyes,
Reflecting 1000 reasons to cry.
We all know this world is full of lie.
We also have nothing to rely on.

just close your crying eyes,
so there will be no flowing tears.
Let all your sorrow passing by.
Surely facing tomorrow with no fear.

Now hold my hand tight.
I will make your scattered heart reunite.
Let the sun iginte your frozen heart.
and your sad story will restart.

I am not a prince,
Who ride a white horse,
but i am a carver,
Who will make Monalisa smile carved,
Carved forever on your lips.


By David Setiawan

Tender Illusion

I am waiting in this quiet evening,
please come and retreive my lost smile.
Time has deflected trough our memories.
Our melodies became tender.

When we saw the place where stars exsist.
I was always dreaming trough my illusion.
That we'll always smiling trough the time.
I hope that we will met again.

I dont know why your smile became so bitter.
Where is the smile that coat your heart.
Searching unconsiously for our memories.
With your wings we crossed the sea.

When we saw the place where stars exsist.
I want to reach the falling star.
I will tenderly hold your hand.
And close our eyes and make a wish.

In the night.......
When i see your blurry illusion.
We were watching the rain stars together.
but when i slowly close my eyes.
I lost my wish on a blink.
So let me hold your hand and resemble your exsistence.


By David Setiawan

Loving you in Eternity

The way you smiling at me,
is the sweetest smile that i ever seen.
The day we met for the first time,
is the day that i won't regret.

I made you the angel inside my heart.
Believing that your wings will take me to the moon.
Hoping that we have no sorrow for tomorrow.

The joy reflected on your eyes,
is the one that i saw once in my dream.
I can't wait no longer to lie to you.
that i truly love you, even you never understand.

You no longer hold me back from giving up.
I start to panic, have I done something wrong?
My tears is flowing as my tomorrow is vanishing.

The way you left me alone,
Makes my heart burn like hell,
But the feather left inside my heart,
Give me another reason to keep loving you.
The Wings inside my heart keep me away from detesting you.
Now i believe...
That its just me that loving you in eternity.


By David Setiawan
Please do post some comments

Wow!!! It clearly states that your head over heels in love with this girl. I suggest that you give it to her... It might change her mind...

Your poem has intense emotion and i felt it... It feels like I was actually hearing it directly from your heart... well, it struck me...good job!!!

God Bless YOU!!!:goodman:

I think its too late, she already have a boyfriend just now. At first actually really pain but now i realize that in order to taste a sweet smile, we need to taste the bitter of tears. Hehe but thx i am ok now.

Cinderella Tears

I see Cinderella tears on your eyes,
Reflecting 1000 reasons to cry.
We all know this world is full of lie.
We also have nothing to rely on.

just close your crying eyes,
so there will be no flowing tears.
Let all your sorrow passing by.
Surely facing tomorrow with no fear.

Now hold my hand tight.
I will make your scattered heart reunite.
Let the sun iginte your frozen heart.
and your sad story will restart.

I am not a prince,
Who ride a white horse,
but i am a carver,
Who will make Monalisa smile carved,
Carved forever on your lips.


By David Setiawan.....Your poems are great..this one is my fave...Beautiful:heart:

Diary of Love

Who opened the door to my heart,
Lead me into the world of love.
Sakura and smile cover my day.
Forget days and night, we smile together.

Day by day has passed.
Tune that played by your tweet,
compose our love song.
You wrote a beautiful story on my diary.

But.......
Now the rainbow has turned gray.
The piano play our tune no more.
A blank paper left open on my diary.

I stare at the sky.
Whispering softly to the star upward,
"i am glad you have found your missing love".
There will be no regret,
Coz inside my heart all written your name.

Nb: Sakura is a pink japanese flower, in Asia its somehow related to a tender love.

By David Setiawan

you construct great poems. I will watch this thread starting now. Thanks for the words!

Leaving Me Loving you

I See your smile no more.
you left a notch deep inside me.
The clouds has turned into ash,
Seen like the sky feel my despair.

The song i have composed for you,
has slowly started to cry.
the sorrow lies inside my heart,
Soaring hundreds painful love.

Many fellow walk into your life.
Each had been my nightmare for the night passed.
The end has drawn near.
The dream of you will soon fade to black.

There will be no us on tomorrow.
I am counting the time left,
wondering how much seconds left....
Just to say "I Love You more than I hate You"

By David Setiawan
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My First Love

Staring at the sparkling stars,
remind me of my lost love story.
The first moment her smile fell so warm.
Something that people called First Love.

The point in time you left me,
Tears concealed inside my heart.
Regret overwhelmed your gaze.
We said nothing but remain silence.

I said in whisper,
I will wait for you.
as years and years roll by,
We both forgot our commitment.

Perhaps the world has changed.
Seen like everything covered with soupy mist.
Ignoring each other like a total stranger.
But still the fond memories of you,
Will always be my best remembrance.

By David Setiawan

ok. what i felt about this poem is that this is like a hopeless hope that you would get together but in the end you are alone.
Honestly, even though some are not in rhyme. The way you read is flows easily. Im sorry i cant express myself more. JUst would like to note that i will record this in my own personal poem collection :) thanks for sharing

beatuiful poems the best i had ever seen!
keep up the gr8 work

Hi thx 4 ur comment on my poetry, i am really glad that you really like my work. About the rhyme, heheh thats my bad, i will try to make its rhyme better on my future works. Actually i have a work that is totaly rhymed but some poeple said that i forced the rhyme. Btw Maverick if you have a good collection, you may post it here. I think you must have a great collection of poetry. But thats if you don't mind.

Love by SMS

The first time i send you a short message,
my heart beat, as if its going to jump out.
Every words craved slowly,
A sentence took an age to be thought.

When i browse my small phonebook,
Anxiety and Happiness possess within my mind.
Everytime i saw your name there,
the expression on your face drawn on my eyes.

It cost me an age to send you my message.
Every second my gaze pointed at my phone.
Wished that your name will appear on the screen.
Each time the tone hum, i hope its from you.

I read your SMS letter by letter,
Curious to recieve the next one.
but..
It never arrive even then sun have arose.
but still staring at my cellphone.

By David Setiawan

Comments and advise are welcome

dont a lot about poetry
another gr8 poem rep added

Love Myth

My lonely love is flowing by
Passing the river of my teardrops
Passing by the river left from my teardrops
until i can't see your relection on my eyes

Thousand days waiting for you love
Searching for a slight love inside your lonely smile
Begging for your love inside my endless dream
Where is that sparkle love gave to my life

Every night my heart ache
Thinking about your pretty face
Give me strength to face thousand painful love
Altough you'll never understand my endless love

I will close my eyes and open my heart
So i have no regret to leave my painful nightmare
But believe me i can wait another thousand days
Just to see love be a blossoming flower inside our hearts
As long as i never give up my dreams
Shall i, once again, be a part of this endless love myth?


By David Setiawan
Comments and advise are welcome

Dusts of Love

With the flaps of ur wings
You flew away to the sky
Leaving me alone behind
Composing 1000 love stories inside my dream

the memories of you and me
Blew away like a dusts
the river of my tears
Reflecting the moment we shared together

Where is ur love that is burn like hell
Had it turned into a falling snow
the snow on the day u leave me

Now pale covering my body
i no longer want ur love
by closing my eyes
i can see the smile on your lips
its more than enough to have the dusts of ur love
rather than to lost all ur love

By David Setiawan
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Nb: This is some of my early poem so maybe its not good yet ^^

OMG! you are the sweetest dude ever! ^_^
great poems, full of intensity, sincere and very romantic. great work mate!

Ahaha thx 4 ur compliment neguno. Somehow your poetry is better than me ^^

The Hero Behind You

The sun has set,
Yet the moon does not shine.
The sparkling stars have lost their gleam.
Darkness covers your gaze.

Each moment you cry,
I will become your hero.
When my hand holds yours,
The sorrow inside will perish.

Let me embrace you
And brush away your flowing tears.
The cloudy sky will form a rainbow
And happiness will be yours forever.

The day you lose every hope,
I will right behind you.
This hand of mine will become your wings.
This is my way of loving you.

By David Setiawan

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This poem shows that you are a very sensitive and caring guy. You let her feel that you are always be with her whenever she'll need you. It may not have rhyme but the main essence of the poem is very clear and striking. I like you style. great poem mate!

Hehehe thx Neguno 4 ur compliments, i will post my new poetry later. Btw i am also curious to read your new poem it must be romantic i am really owe you (You have a beautiful girlfriend) and i still stay single hehehe

My Family Now and Future

The most perfect mother,
Who can't never be replaced.
A warm smile as a sign of love.
A tender heart to make my problem smoother.

The most gentle Father,
Who act more likely a brother.
A strong hand to teach me every work.
Protect me from becoming a jerk.

The most kind brother,
with whom i share my snicker together.
The only best friend i have.
Who always send me their best rave.

Now, i no longer feel worry
and no need to feel lonely.
Because i have a happy family.
Lets face tomorrow without flurry.

By David Setiawan
DavidSetiawan.co.nr (http://www.davidsetiawan.co.nr)

Nb: Sorry for not updating this thread for long time, i am back now. Post some comments please.

Destiny and Fate

Destiny do really exist,
once, we were united.
The fond of memories we shared,
consist of our smile.

Certainly believe in time,
that it will preserve our love.
Every tune we had played,
its all engraved inside my heart.

Fate also do really exist,
now we are no longer together.
Even the birds belittled me.
My heart silently cried.

Tenderly I told the wind,
"I wanna love you more than i could".
If only destiny and fate upon us,
you can hear the song of the wind.

By David Setiawan
DavidSetiawan.co.nr (http://www.davidsetiawan.co.nr)

Nb: Post some comments please.

splendid poem collections mate...realy nice....*cry* broken heart syndrome...

Beautiful Bond...

I'll never believe that
mere luck brought us together,
because we came into each other's lives
when we needed each other most
and suddenly every day
became a little brighter
and the troubles we faced
became a little lighter.
There was a natural and beautiful bond
between us from the start,
and loving you has always
been so easy to do.
And now I'm looking forward
to the days ahead,
rediscovering the beauty
of life and loving you.

Beautiful Dream...

You came to me
beneath the dawn's
radiant rim,
in a place of fragrant
roses and violets.
And you gave me
sweet kisses,
and you held me close,
and promised me tomorrow.
A sky full of gold above us,
soft grass beneath us,
we feasted on each other,
longing for nothing.
What a beautiful dream!
Would you care to
make it a reality?

@olympia786 well nice poem, both are romantic and beautiful, well its better if you split them on several stanza. I like the second one more, since it was ended with a "?" some of my poetry also have this kind of style, its nice to find people who like to use "?" on the end of poetry keep it up m8, but next time please post in on new thread ok. Gud luck

u know most people believe in love, but i don't, it only leaves u heart broke, i might be wrong, cus my friends and their relationships wit their girlfriends always ends in cow dung
forget the wordplay, what i'm trying to say is love is for the birds but good poetry there hommie i'm sure u gonna get all the gurls.LOL

those are some sweet poems they are really indescribable and inspiriting
great work i have saved 3/4 of them already
keep on posting

Toy Of Love

Every moment that we had,
can they be meaningless?
Every word that you said,
are all engraved in my heart.

You always come to me,
with enormous wishes.
Is it a source of pride or pity
living under your command?

The smile of yours,
is a smile without soul.
You praised me for being adorable,
a compliment merely for a doll.

If only I could hear you say,
"I Love You",
I can then realize
that I was wrong.

By David Setiawan
DavidSetiawan.co.nr (http://www.davidsetiawan.co.nr)

Colder than Snow

A called so queen,
She was staring at me.
A living Goddless,
Whom every man put their eyes on.

Was it a dream?
The look like crystal eyes.
Teeth that resembles Pearls.
A gleaming lips made you perfect.

No day without your smile.
I saved every words you said.
All wish is to be by your side.
Should i ask for more?

But,
An ignorance for my love,
Hundred stabs toward my feeling.
You are truly colder than snow.

By David Setiawan
DavidSetiawan.co.nr (http://www.davidsetiawan.co.nr)

Friends BigBoss, have reason love is in pratique nt theory ? The more u love/phisically the more the gal will love you believe me as im a guy like u in the past !!!! Now i dont i have dozen of poem but they dont work with modern gurl !!!! you have to leaves ur pc n find someone !!!!! dont wait in dreams , hope u got my msg !!!! love is physically-actions-reactions-chemical remember the words HARD IN LOVE . IN NT POEM IT SEX .....

@mayeven you somehow rite, but girls like romantic things too, and if only you can do a lot of romantic things by action the gals will definitely luv ya. One of those actions is poetry, girls like when you say something romantic, and ya know there even something romantic when you write it and not say it. But people has different oppinion rite hehe.

i agree to u but when u settle the girl d'ont waste times to concludes it , i have commited the error as urself in the past .... learn form ur own mistake .....okay have a nice days u r have the style in poetry try to have it over ur fear ..........