~Reality II~My Lord
My Lord my Realm
My Lord red land living terrain
My Lord blue sky without mist
My Lord is Luxuriant Big tree, huge, powerful
My Lord the Wind fresh air
My Lord is Sun
My Lord Moon
My Lord, Anger
My Lord, tenderness
My Lord is entirely Sensation
My Lord is this Living world?
Yes
My Lord is Evident .

By Camilla, 20/10/2004, 00:01 am

~Reality ~Maturity
have you ever felt bitter,
as bitter as a tears drop
Contemptible,
as contemptible as a traitor
Broken heart,
as broken as a shattered glass
I ever!!
Felt blank, empty, without meaning
But, believe....
Thats all only a second.
then you will find your own soul
that is demand to be saved
than if you a bit patient and submit to your fate
all that is bitter will be sweet,
as sweet as an angel's smile
Noble,
as noble as the golden knight
Optimist,
Optimistly
I have passed it all
and...
Life had chosen me maturity
which made me laugh my previous naive.


By Camilla, 29/10/2004, 00:39 am

Hi Camilla thx 4 joining here
My Comment:
@~Reality ~Maturity
The idea is really touch me, i mean it remind me at the begining of my teenage period. I think you only need to seperate it into several stanza. This poetry is mixed into one stanze, kinda hard to seperate it. The part i like most is "Thats all only a second.
then you will find your own soul
that is demand to be saved
than if you a bit patient and submit to your fate"
Nice work, keep it up, hope your next poetry will be seperated into several stanza.

Thats all only my opinion, don't take it seiously, you know what is best for your work.

Bye bye n Take Care

garnet4david2001:Thats all only my opinion, don't take it seriously, you know what is best for your work.
:heart: ;) I Hope this isn't caused by date and clock when I created that, its midnight...hahahaha (if I don't wrong typing am and pm thats confusing me because I always forget when am and when pm:oops: , my country dont use am and pm:(, Its Ok, whatever the comment is my risk to hear , and your comment is honest, spontanious, who can take it badly?:heart:

I Hope this isn't caused by date and clock when I created that, its midnight...hahahaha (if I don't wrong typing am and pm thats confusing me because I always forget when am and when pm , my country dont use am and pm, Its Ok, whatever the comment is my risk to hear , and your comment is honest, spontanious, who can take it badly?

Hehehe, its okay, Btw Am is for morning (00:00-12:00) and Am is for (13:00-24:00) but you cannot write 24:00, but you must write it 12:00PM so Am Pm used for 12 hour system ^^, i am looking forward for your new work

WOW! really deep!

Hehehe, its okay, Btw Am is for morning (00:00-12:00) and Am is for (13:00-24:00) but you cannot write 24:00, but you must write it 12:00PM so Am Pm used for 12 hour system ^^, i am looking forward for your new work
:heart: Well, its JUST MIDNIGHT, ahhhh PM? I always got sensitive and centimente attack pass midnight ...Eh-eh-eh-Ehmmmmm-Ehmmmm:oops:
And, Thanks hakika....deep as the bottom of the ocean...Ohhh No Its not midnight in my time, why that feeling attack me so soon, hihihi:heart:

:heart: For All Girls...(me include):heart:

Advice for My Dear Daughter,My Princess

Human is created different indeed,
don't ask why.
Troublesome you will not find the answer,
why is insane and why is craziness
The most important is you be aware of the difference,
Very important, you accept that.

That man, you dont need to bind
Believe that he is for you,
so he is yours,
don't you believe?

As long as you live for yourself
That long you will happy
Other people is not your burden
He also won't be happy to burden you
He is only your friend in life,
not your burden.

Please Living lightly...
then the world will work together with you,
my dear daughter, my princess
to engrave your contented smile.


By Camilla 23/05/2005, centimente time

@garnet4david2001 nice of you to pm me-you asked dude about poetry... however I am but a mere onlooker, travelling on this planet for but a brief moment in time - that moment faster than a blink of an eye....tbc;)

@camilla youre welcome ...deeper than the depth of space:)

Hi Camilla, new poems already, you sure have a lot of idea od making a new poem, btw i got one too its titled "My First Love"

Ok here is my comment:

@Advice for My Dear Daughter,My Princess
I think the title is too long. I am really sorry but his one "That long you will happy" should be "That long you will be happy".
Everything is fine, but the only thing bother me is the flow is scrambled. I mean the meaning of this poetry is too deep, still cannot find any connection between the first stanza ad the rest. The only thing i can pressume from this one is that you are a parent of the princess and give her an advice.

Btw this is only my comments, ignore it if you fell i have said anything wrong. You know what best for your poetry. Btw keep it up this one is nice 2.

Bye bye n Take Care

-garnet4david2001-

- david you asked if i have some poems, well i dont know if this is a poem but it was sent as an sms to me, i thought its very nice so here it is:

Love & friendship met one day.

Love asked - ''why do you exist when I'm around?''

Friendship replied-"To bring laughter where you leave tears behind!!''

Ooooh a romantic SMS, hmm how about create a new thread "hakika's Romantic SMS Colection" i wonder if you have a lot of collection of that sms?
Thx 4 posing m8

:D thanks david i havent got that many sms like this ...actually i think this is the only one:D anyway sorry off topic..i tried to pm you but your box full- you deal with relationships...well you advise on that sort of thing in different thread ...very interesting stuff, can you offer your views/ comments on.. how is it alot of girls push a guy into the 'friends zone' watch film 'just friends' :D

Hi Camilla, new poems already, you sure have a lot of idea od making a new poem, btw i got one too its titled "My First Love"

Ok here is my comment:

@Advice for My Dear Daughter,My Princess
I think the title is too long. I am really sorry but his one "That long you will happy" should be "That long you will be happy".
Everything is fine, but the only thing bother me is the flow is scrambled. I mean the meaning of this poetry is too deep, still cannot find any connection between the first stanza ad the rest. The only thing i can pressume from this one is that you are a parent of the princess and give her an advice.

Btw this is only my comments, ignore it if you fell i have said anything wrong. You know what best for your poetry. Btw keep it up this one is nice 2.

Bye bye n Take Care

-garnet4david2001-
:heart: Really?...Ok, its like this, It is an advice in poem language, for all girls, including me...its a 'sweetheart Mom advice'. I don't have a sweetheart mom, so I make an advice for myself and I pretending like my mom told me that;). (how poor I am hahaha). Its an advice that I want to keep in my life...and I want to share with all gal in here. For The missing word 'be', I think it is okie, and not change the meanning of my poetry...Its forgiven in poem language;)
GBU David, take care too.
hakika''why do you exist when I'm around?To bring laughter where you leave tears behind", its lovely , Really Lovely:idea: :heart:

:heart: hakika, its inspired by you;), its a simple poetry.:heart:


Tears Price

How much your tears price?
Mine is unknown.
What made you cry so your tears come?
Mine is unknown for you..
How to remove your tears?
Mine is your smile..your laugh..
How if a smile and laugh can not remove our tears?
the answer is God will do that for me,
and He did it Perfectly.


by Camilla, 22 July 2006
09:49.

Well camilla seems getting around with hakika ^^. Ok this is my comment for Camilla:

@Tears Price:
"How much your tears price?
Mine is unknown."
First i think it should be how much the price of your tears, then mine is priceless (or you really dont know the price of your tears)
"Mine is unknown for you.." i dont get the meaning of this part maybe you want to say that you dont know where you tears come from, but whats the meaning of for you in that sentence?, so you should remove the "for you".
And this one "How if a smile and laugh can not remove our tears?" i think should be How if both of smile and laugh cannot remove your tears. If you use ours thats mean it dont relate to the previous line (You never mention that your tears flowing)

Btw this is only my comments, ignore it if you fell i have said anything wrong. You know what best for your poetry. Btw its really rare to see a romantic poem from Camilla ^^.

Bye bye n Take Care

-garnet4david2001-

Well camilla seems getting around with hakika ^^. Ok this is my comment for Camilla:

@Tears Price:
"How much your tears price?
Mine is unknown."
First i think it should be how much the price of your tears, then mine is priceless (or you really dont know the price of your tears)
"Mine is unknown for you.." i dont get the meaning of this part maybe you want to say that you dont know where you tears come from, but whats the meaning of for you in that sentence?, so you should remove the "for you".
And this one "How if a smile and laugh can not remove our tears?" i think should be How if both of smile and laugh cannot remove your tears. If you use ours thats mean it dont relate to the previous line (You never mention that your tears flowing)

Btw this is only my comments, ignore it if you fell i have said anything wrong. You know what best for your poetry. Btw its really rare to see a romantic poem from Camilla ^^.

Bye bye n Take Care

-garnet4david2001-
:heart: Nope, David, it is 'unknown'...to explain something which hard to know or identified, I want it sound like a mystery or I want to keep where my tears came from, and I want my readers will think so much with their own opinions, OK;). And it is 'how if both' is to long for me, it is not eassy to read because a lot of explainations. I choose 'How if a smile and laugh can not remove....' , is not hard to understand too and don't change the meaning also withouth 'both' word.. GBU David, Thanks for comment, Take care:heart:

aww:) & wow! I feel honoured that I have a poem inspired by me- thank you so much..it is really nice & the perfect ending.

Which leads me to the author of the poem-her name means: perfect, complete.

aww:) & wow! I feel honoured that I have a poem inspired by me- thank you so much..it is really nice & the perfect ending.

Which leads me to the author of the poem-her name means: perfect, complete.
:heart: :lol: Eh-eh-eh you should... ,And Wow too! whose name mean perfect?:idea:, my name? In what language?:???::lol: :heart:

I should feel honoured??? :O soo modest :D & yes honestly wow too;) answer to your question=
In Arabic language.

I should feel honoured??? :O soo modest :D & yes honestly wow too;) answer to your question=
In Arabic language.
:heart: WoWW,in arabic intero/whole is Kamil? Close to my name Camilla. Hehehe, yess you should because I am feel honoured by you too:heart: :lol:

Camilla thanks for nice comments aww..Im going to get in trouble by mods now :D anyway... i did a search just now please check;) hxxp://www.babynology.com/arabic/baby-names-girl_K_0_s.html

yes I feel soo honoured that I (If I ever have) will name one of my daughters Camilla/ Kamilla -after you:)

:lol::lol::lol:cami, u r always indulge in boring things. either usingpink colur or poems. although few of them r gud, but i dnt feel like reading such emotional poems. try some romantic, full of passion, luv, etc. etc. i hope u understand what i wanna say :weedman: live the life fullest instead of getting emotional. simple facts which will keep u intact.:lol::lol:

@banks::snakeman: Hhhh, banks:idea: I made this love poem for my Exboyfriend:lol:

:heart: My Heart's Secret:heart:

My heart Has a Secret

It's Covered By My Act

Covered Like a Capsule

When You Pull It

The Capsule Will Be Apart

And Sowed What's Inside

Its Your Name Show

Then My Heart's Secret Is Your Name:heart:

By Camilla~19/august/2006, 09:25 AM

:weedman: lucky guy gud poems. am sorry can;t repute again:???:

:weedman: lucky guy gud poems. am sorry can;t repute again:???:
:heart: :lol: I broke up with him, how came he is a Lucky guy? He WAS Lucky when he have me!!-Lol: He-he-he-he-he :heart:

well u can say that, atleast it is evident from the the poems that u still luv him. nyways keep going, ur poems r really gud:weedman:

Hehehe welcome back Camilla, glad to see you here again

My comments:
Sowed i think it should be showed correct me if i am wrong
I dont know the reason why you breakup, but its seems that you still love him within your heart. Thats why all inside your heart written his name. My advice is if you still like him, i think you should get back with him ^^.

Take Care

Hehehe welcome back Camilla, glad to see you here again

My comments:
Sowed i think it should be showed correct me if i am wrong
I dont know the reason why you breakup, but its seems that you still love him within your heart. Thats why all inside your heart written his name. My advice is if you still like him, i think you should get back with him ^^.

Take Care
:heart: Hehehe Thanks david, and it is SOWED in indonesian means ''bertaburan'', Okie!:heart:

cami, its been a long time seen ur poem. i think u got ur luv back:lol: well that doesnt mean that u 4get us. now u can start writing the poems of luv, i mean when a person falls in luv or when he/she gets it back :heart::heart::heart:

cami, its been a long time seen ur poem. i think u got ur luv back:lol: well that doesnt mean that u 4get us. now u can start writing the poems of luv, i mean when a person falls in luv or when he/she gets it back :heart::heart::heart:

:heart: :heart: Hhhhhh, Bad News Mr.banks, i am not in love, but I have take to hospital, I have a little stone in my kidney and doctor said its cauzed by mr.banks;-):heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Aww Camilla u got a kidney stone :( i hear these are very painful :( get well soon ...hey im glad your poem section is still here, i thought it was removed..

@hakika , YaP, Its painful verymuch:cry: ,

:heart: This one is made while I can't sleep because my back and all of my body pain.......Sentimente time:heart:

My someone

I Want to Found Someone
Someone That Really Care
And I Can Take Care of Him Eassily

Someone Who Look At Me With Eyes
Like Sunshine In The Middle Of The Cold Night

Someone With Tender
Talking To Me Seriously
That He Can Receive My Yesterday
As He Can Receive My Today
And Always By My Side in My Tomorrow

I Want To Found Someone
To Pass Every Second In My Whole Life
Without Fear In My Heart
That He will Left Me In The Middle Of The Street

And I...
Really Want To Found Someone
Who I Can Proudly Called Him..
.. My Soulmate.

~By: Camilla 06-09-2006~

:heart: :heart: Hhhhhh, Bad News Mr.banks, i am not in love, but I have take to hospital, I have a little stone in my kidney and doctor said its cauzed by mr.banks;-):heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
what???? u have stone:cry: :cry: am sorry for that camy and please get well soon. ur poems r just like u- amazing:heart: :heart:

what???? u have stone:cry: :cry: am sorry for that camy and please get well soon. ur poems r just like u- amazing:heart: :heart:

:heart: Thank you Very Much mr.bank:heart: , I am still on my healing treatment now, uuuuhhhh pray for me Okie:idea:

:heart: Thank you Very Much :heart:mr.banks:heart: , I am still on my healing treatment now, uuuuhhhh pray for me Okie:idea:

As A Woman

You should be soft
You should be patient because your power is not as big as man
You should look beautiful
You should keep your body line


You have to cook for your family
You have to keep your babies
You have to keep your home clean
You have to make your home as a sweet home


You have to got menstruations, Ups.. every mounth
You have to carry your baby inside your body, 9 mounths each one
You have to birth human with pain, you cry and your baby cry ,its hurt you both I think
You have to do that and more incredible job like cleaning your baby's diapers


You have to be a hot volcano for your husband, Hmmm.. I Like this part
You have to be angel for your children
You have to do all characters in the same time, Oh My God


You Don't have to work outside your home
You Dont have to look for the money, You just need to keep your husband's moneys
You Dont have to build a House, You just stay in your husband's house
You Dont Have to think about politics, You just need to think what colour match for your lipstics

It is hard, real hard, make migraine on my head
My grandma told me that all things since I am a kid
And I always laugh on her, told it was stupid

Time goes...
And Time told me that it is not stupid at all
It is a Woman Part, In natural and capacity, Classic but not stupid
And, it's a best way if I dont want to destroy the life, my life

As A Woman...
In this short life,
That is the sweetest part, Like a Paradise
And paradise is good for my body


By: Camilla
15 November 2006, 9:50 PM, NORMAL times.